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Post by Sageyy Viles on Jul 13, 2010 16:24:02 GMT -4
OOC:Okay folks! So this was totally and COMPLETELY Reagan "The Hottie" Harper's idea:) She's such a great brainstormer. Anyone on this site who has a boyfriend (or girlfriend) or just in general LOVES somebody, gets to post their OWN version of the famous poem from 10 Things I Hate About You. I'll post the original poem then start by posting my own :) We appreciate your participation!!This is the originalI hate the way you talk to me And the way you cut your hair I hate the way you drive my car I hate it when you stare
I hate your big dumb combat boots And the way you read my mind I hate you so much that it makes me sick It even makes me ryhme
I hate the way you're always right I hate it when you lie I hate it when you make me laugh Even worse when you make me cry
I hate the way you're not around And the fact that you didn't call But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all. This is My version to get things started:) I hate the way you make me me smile And the times when you aren't there I hate it when people look at us I hate that I don't care
I hate when you leave your family And the times that you're much to kind I hate how much you know me But it's not like I really mind.
I hate how much I trust you I hate it when you leave I hate when I see our life together But wake up and it's only a dream
I hate how much you love me And how much my love for you grows To this day I know that I don't hate you No matter rain or sleet or even when it snows.
[/center] I think it would be nice to put an 'ooc' at the top of your post just to let the person above you know what you liked about theirs. But I'll do this by saying how much I LOVE Reagan Harper:) Happy Posting!--Sageyy
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Post by Reagan Harper on Jul 13, 2010 16:58:17 GMT -4
Awww Sageee! I love it, but I don't think I clearifed exactly what I was doing LOL. I'm just going to use the original poem, seperating it line by line, and show how it applies to my character and whoever I choose. But that is REALLY cool what you did as well, so people can do both if they want . I'm gonna go start working on mine right now so you can see what I'm talking about. LOVE YOU.
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Post by Sageyy Viles on Jul 13, 2010 18:51:50 GMT -4
r u for rizzal?! I sat here for like an HOUR thinking about this stupid thing!
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Post by Cadelina Wolfe on Jul 13, 2010 19:47:58 GMT -4
OOC: well i can't do an IC one because my character doesn't have any of that but i can do an OOC one so i'll let you decide what you think and i'll maybe add an IC one later. But here we go.OOC Poem based on the 10 Things I Hate About You Poem
I hate the way you ignore me And when you walk right by me without a second glance I hate the way I cry over you I hate the pain it causes me
I hate your big baby blue bronco And the way you call me at night to tell me you love me I hate that I say it right back It makes me sick inside
I hate how I agree to do things with you I hate it when you blow me off I hate that you can make me laugh so hard And cry just as hard five minutes later
I hate the b.s. you tell me And the lies that you make up when I find out it’s b.s. I hate you so much But in the end I love you too.
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Post by Reagan Harper on Jul 13, 2010 20:12:29 GMT -4
-FOR JACOB BLACK- [/b][/size][/color] I Hate The Way You Talk To Me.. [/b][/size][/color] "Reagan! Where have you been? I missed you!" I remember you saying that as you took me in your arms and spun me around. You always make me feel so wanted, although I know I'm not your first choice. It was always her..."Rea, she makes me so happy. You know, Bella? I just wish she felt the same way...""I understand, Jake.""You're a great friend, Reagan. You'll always be my ray of sunshine, you know that right?"And The Way You Cut Your Hair... [/b][/size][/color] "Jake! I haven't seen you in forever. Your hair... it's gone!""I know, and it's better if we keep it that way. I don't want to see you anymore.""Jake! What are you talking about?! And why have you been hanging out with Sam? I thought you said you hated him!""Sam knows what's best for me. You don't, Reagan. You never did.""Jacob...?" I remember watching you storm out. Leaving your best friend behind and heart-broken. We didn't talk until a month and a half later, when I finally phased and understood why you were so moody.I Hate It When You Drive My Car... [/b][/size][/color] "Jacob Black! Stop doing that!" I remember yelling at you. You laughed again as you spun the car around in a circle and then drove again. I thought you were done but then you started to swerve in the other lane... "Jake!" You kept laughing, and it was so contagious I started to laugh too.I Hate It When You Stare... [/b][/size][/color] "Whoo! We scored!" I remember jumping up from your couch, clapping my hands as my favorite team player scored a basket. It was just you and I hanging out at your house. I came over late, so I was dressed in my pajamas and my hair was in a sloppy bun. I remember glancing over at you, to see you staring at me instead of the T.V. That was a first. "Aren't you happy?""Ecstatic," You had said, your eyes never leaving me. I rose an eyebrow at you."What are you looking at? What's so interesting?""You."I never felt so beautiful.I Hate Your Big, Dumb Combat Boots... [/b][/size][/color] "Jacob, seriously? Those are hideous.""Yes, seriously. I like them. They'll come in handy.I remember rolling my eyes. You place the shoes by my nose and I pushed you away playfully, "Whatever Jake."And The Way You Read My Mind... [/b][/size][/color] I remember sitting in Emily's kitchen with the pack. School just let out for the day and I just got dumped by Broody Coffman. Izzy wasn't home yet, and I was sitting at the table with Jared, Paul, and Quil. They hadn't noticed anything was wrong. As soon as you walked in, however, you did. I remember you taking me out on the porch and asking what was wrong."Nothing." I remember you smiling a little bit. You knew all you had to do was cup my face before I spilled the beans. "Broody broke up with me." You took me in your arms then, holding me so tight that I remember it was hard to breathe."I love you Reagan. Always. That's all that matters."I Hate You So Much It Makes Me Sick, It Even Makes Me Rhyme... [/b][/size][/color] "Jacob Black. When he kisses, it's a smack. Wow, this poem is wack. I wish he would call me back..." Yeah, I wrote that in my notebook in Chemistry class. That's how crazy you drove me and how bored I was.I Hate It... I Hate The Way You're Always Right. [/b][/size][/color] "You're going to fall for me, Reagan, and you're not going to know what to do with yourself when you do."I Hate It When You Lie... [/b][/size][/color] I remember talking to you earlier that morning at school, You told me you were going to be hanging out with Quil and Embry later. Something about riding bikes. Then I called Billy to see if you were home yet. "Billy, is Jake home from riding?""Riding? Jake told me he was going to the movies with Bella two hours ago...I Hate It When You Make Me Laugh... [/b][/size][/color] Trying to take pictures on a Mac with you goofing off behind it is not easy, Jacob. Oh, and this was right before you tackled me into a tickle fight. I hate you.Even Worse When You Make Me Cry... [/b][/size][/color] "Jacob is in love with Bella, Rea. I'm sorry."I remember storming out of Emily's house. I didn't want to hear it anymore. Especially since I was in love with you too. I remember slamming the door to my grandmother's car, gripping tightly onto the steering wheel as I started to cry. I didn't put my car into drive until an hour later.I Hate It When You're Not Around... [/b][/size][/color] It's been two and a half months, and you're still gone. I really hate that she did this to you.And The Fact That You Didn't Call... [/b][/size][/color] "Hey! It's Jake. Leave a message."Hey Jake. It's me, Reagan. Calling you for the fifth time. I...I miss you. Give me a call back when you get the chance. Bye." I never got that call.But Mostly, I Hate The Way I Don't Hate You... [/b][/size][/color] "Where are you going?""Home.""Not without giving me a goodbye kiss.""What?" I remember turning around to see you with the goofiest expression on your face as you tapped your cheek impatiently. I rolled my eyes and gave you a peck."I love you, Rearea."Not Even Close... [/b][/size][/color] "The sky is blue, Bessie. Not Red.""Stop calling me that!""...Bessie."Not Even A Little Bit... [/b][/size][/color] "Jake, can you help me reach the flour up there?" You grabbed me by the sides and I squealed slightly when you lifted me in the air to grab the flour. "I didn't it mean it that way, but that works." Then you started laughing, and as well all know, that's when I started to too.Not Even At All. [/b][/size][/color] "I think I love you Reagan." You joked one night when I got you the tool you needed to finish The Rabbit."I think I love you too Jacob."(I Do.) [/b][/size][/color]
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Post by Isabelle Viles on Jul 13, 2010 20:52:59 GMT -4
For Jacob [/color][/font] I hate the way you talk to me "Isabelle. Don't be stupid. Bella...she's everything to me."And the way you cut your hair "What the hell?!" I shrieked as I gripped your short hair in my small hands. You didn't notice, you never noticed. I hate the way you drive my car "I swear to all that is f*cking holy Jacob Ephraim Black if you crash my car, I will murder you." I said as I gripped the arm rest next to me. You just smiled and continued to drive recklessly.I hate it when you stare "He hasn't even called me back. I don't know what's wrong and it's worrying the crap out of me...Jake? Jake? Are you even listening?" I turned to see your dark brown eyes fixated only on me, when I thought you were watching the waves in front of us, as I was. I hate your big dumb combat boots "Are you joking? I'm never getting rid of these things!" You told me like I stupid for even thinking about it.And the way you read my mind I laughed as Paul made a face at me from across the room. We were all gathered at my house sitting around the living room. The doorbell rang and I jumped up to answer it. I opened the door with a wide smile that dropped from my face when I saw Luke standing behind it with a very pregnant Stephanie. I followed the two back into the living room and sat on the loveseat. You looked at me and came over, pulled me into your lap and stroked my hair telling me the entire time how much you loved me.I hate you so much that it makes me sick "Just stay away from me, Jacob!" I shouted as I slammed my bedroom door closed. I flung myself onto my bed and cried.It even makes me ryhme "Roses are red, violets are blue, neither matter as much as I love you." you rolled your eyes and pecked my lips. What I didn't tell you was that it made my day, just to be in your presence.I hate the way you're always right "Izzy, I'm not kidding she told me that she was dating him." I rolled my eyes and decided to check on Facebook, just to prove you wrong. When I signed onto the social networking website I frowned as I saw that you were right. You made sure I remembered that for ages.I hate it when you lie "Why are you doing this?" I called after you with tears in my eyes. "Sam's orders." you told me. I walked all the way to Sam's house, walked in without knocking and found the man in the living room, with Jacob sitting across the room. "Did you make him break up with me?" I asked. Sam shook his head 'no'. I hate it when you make me laugh "And then Embry fell on his face!" I laughed so hard my ribs ached.Even worse when you make me cry I looked down as you walked away from me yet again. I didn't know how much more I could take. I was near my breaking point and it seemed there were more bad times in our relationship than good. I hate the way you're not around Two months. Two months since I've seen your face. Two long months. I hate what you've become because of her, a girl who can't ever love you as much as I do.And the fact that you didn't call I glanced down at my cell phone for what seemed like the billionth time. No calls or text messages. I knew you were too good to be true. But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you "I mean, come on, look at this face!" I did, I do. And I just can't help myself.Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all. "I love you Jacob Black, don't you ever forget it.""I love you too, Iz, I love you too."Oh, how I love you[/color][/font][/center]
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Post by Alana Merez on Jul 14, 2010 13:35:16 GMT -4
Embry CallI hate that I fell in love, with the dimples in your cheeks. And the nervous butterflies I get, when our hands brush I hate that your smile is like a ray of light, warming me. I hate that you don't notice all the little things I see in you.
I hate when I'm in your arms, I feel like I'm the only one. nothing else could touch me, I've never felt so secure. I hate how you can read me like a book already, it's impossible for me to hide from you.
I hate how much I love that I hate through all this... we've only just met. I hate that I've fallen so hard for you. And you're not aware of just how hard.
I hate how I can see your feelings And how the reflect everyone of mine I hate how I could never really hate you, but I can promise to love you forever.
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Post by Bree Pititchu on Jul 14, 2010 16:30:33 GMT -4
-for nick levi- I hate the way you talk to me, [/color] "Isabelle is my best friend, Bree. She's everything to me just like you." You told me one night. I nodded, just because I love you both. And the way you cut your hair,[/color] "Curly! It's so much shorter..." I yelled, not really meaning anything. "Yeah, I cut it while I was away." You said. You knew I didn't want you to. "Yeah but I mean... Wh-why did you cut it?" I asked you. You didn't answer. You went on with everything like it was okay. I hate the way you drive my car,[/color] "NICK! Slow down!" I shrieked. You drove my new-old car faster than a rollercoaster. "Bree, it's fine." You said. You didn't care what I thought. "NICK, it's my car!" I yelled at you. You chuckled like I was joking or something. I hate it when you stare,[/color] "Finished! Isn't it pretty?" I asked. We were building a sandcastle. I was always doing childish things like that. "Nick?" I look over at you, to see you staring at me. "Hm?" You questioned. "What's wrong with me?" I asked. I had never caught him staring at me before. "Nothing," He smiled at me. I felt entirely special. I hate those big dumb combat boots,[/color] "The boots are dirty... You don't want to clean them or something?" I asked. Not like it was anything big, I found them laying around. "No, leave them. They're mine and I like them," You told me angrily "I hate them," I mumbled. I hated when you yelled at me. And the way you read my mind,[/color] I was crying, just because of everything going on. With you, with me, with us, with the pack, with my friends. Everything. One day I just burst. You knew exactly why. You knew everything. You made me happy. I hate you so much it makes me sick,[/color] "You broke my heart once, Nick, it's not happening again. I'm not giving you another chance this time," I yelled at you as I got out of the car in the pooring rain. I didn't mean it. I suddenly felt uneasy, like I was about to lose you. It even makes me rhyme,[/color] "Just stop... Or I'll call the COPS!" I yell my genius poetry aloud to myself about him. I would never call the cops on him. I never want him to stop liking me. I never want to stop seeing him. I hate that. I hate the way you're always right,[/color] "Bree, we could never be the same with me in Montana and you in Washington. Face it." He tells me. I scream at him. I yell. I tell him to stay. He was right. We didn't talk for 1.5 years. I hate it when you lie,[/color] "Bree, I'm going home," You tell me. I text Iz out of boredom and ask where she is. She's with you. I hate it when you make me laugh,[/color] "And we were like, 'Nooooo'" You tell me. I laughed so hard that night. Even worse when you make me cry,[/color] "Just stay AWAY," I yell, tears coming down. I hate the way you're not around,[/color] I can't believe your mom got a job in Montana. I miss you. Everyday. And the fact you didn't call,[/color] "Reagan, he hasn't called. It's been a month. No, I won't call him! He'll think I'm stupid! He'll probably call tomorrow!" I tell her. You never called. But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you,[/color] "I'll always love you," You said the last call I got from you. I couldn't help but smile and know that it was true. I couldn't help but wish you were there. Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all.[/color] "I love you, Bree, more than anyone." You told me when we were together one night. "And I love you," I smiled.[/center][/font] i love you.
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Post by Reagan Harper on Jul 15, 2010 21:45:47 GMT -4
I hate the way I think of you and the way you make me blush I hate how we share inside jokes and the way I question if it's only a crush
I hate your silly faces and how you said you'll always care
But then, when I needed you the most I realized that you were never truly there
I hate it... I hate the way you read me and the way you know all my fears I hate the way you reveal my smile, even worse when you reveal my tears
I hate the way you're with her and the fact that it isn't me But mostly, I hate the way we never had the chance to ever truly be. ][/b]
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Post by Aurora Belle on Jul 21, 2010 14:35:30 GMT -4
Ok, none of this is really true cuz I got no one here or on the outside, But I thought it'd be fun to make one up. I hate the way you make me smile and they way she looks at you I hate the way she's always there And I hate that you can't be true
I hate your torn blue jeans and that our old song is now hers I hate the way I can't help myself and when you smile it makes it worse
I hate the way you make me laugh I hate it when you cry And when you say your fine I havt it so much you make me want to die
I hate when she'd around and when you don't return my calls I hate that I love you But most of all I hate that she's your all.
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Post by Caleb Davis on Jul 21, 2010 15:15:41 GMT -4
Ana I love it when you call me And the way we walk on air. I love it when you look at me I know that we're the perfect pair.
I love your big brown eyes And the times we spend together I love you so much that it makes me hurt I hope i feel this way forever
I love it when you try to yell I love it when you smile I love it when we fall over laughing For you I would run ten miles
You're so special Ana and I hope you know That I will always be here' I will never let you go.
ooc: Woah, the first guy to post!! :P
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Post by jakeblack on Aug 4, 2010 20:46:00 GMT -4
I hate it when you turn to him, And still leave me hanging on. I hate that I’m the one who’s always there, But you only notice when he is gone. I hate that you keep my heart, Even though you don’t have the room. I hate how this is killing me , But you’ll expect my life to just resume. I hate that I’m not able to save you, No matter how much I give. I hate how you’re willing to trade it all, And I’m not reason enough to live… But mostly I hate how it’s never been me, That this fight had already been won. I never even had a chance, Because he’ll always be your number one.
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Post by Isabelle Viles on Aug 5, 2010 19:30:31 GMT -4
^^ oh god, I might've teared up...just a little. That Bella Swan is a lucky bitch. XD
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Post by jakeblack on Aug 5, 2010 21:57:21 GMT -4
Awe <33 I'm glad you like it I'm very proud of it lol xD Maybe why I keep revising it?
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Post by Isabelle Viles on Aug 6, 2010 2:44:15 GMT -4
Possibly. Haha. I would post my Pete one but it's on my computer at home. (:
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