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Mar 23, 2010 14:07:58 GMT -4
Post by Alana Merez on Mar 23, 2010 14:07:58 GMT -4
' Keeping love alive '
Well I tried to find a way to save you, push away all your blues. But somehow I'm still far away from you, so out of touch and out of tune. You run around singing the same old songs, telling me I'm wrong. When all I try to do is change the words, let you know that here we belong. I love you, and I swear I do...but it seems all I can do is lose. How much more must I endure? When will you stop thinking of only you?
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Mar 23, 2010 20:10:02 GMT -4
Post by Reagan Harper on Mar 23, 2010 20:10:02 GMT -4
I love this Alana, very nicely written! =D
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Mar 24, 2010 0:29:38 GMT -4
Post by Alana Merez on Mar 24, 2010 0:29:38 GMT -4
Thanks!! I'm gonna post another poem Instead of making a new thread, i'm gonna stay on one. These are one's I already wrote long ago "Love" I never knew love would come so soon, that my heart could sing such a sweet tune. It was you who taught me how to fly, who taught my heart not to lie. The sky was dark, as I built an arc of protection around my heart. But then you came, and it was no longer the same, that Black and White world of mine. I never thought I'd find a love so sweet, that could make me feel so free. I found it's true, when they say, love is the sweetest surrender.
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Mar 24, 2010 1:02:47 GMT -4
Post by Gabriel Takana on Mar 24, 2010 1:02:47 GMT -4
I like them, well written. I'm not much of a poetry writer so I salute anyone who can.
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Mar 24, 2010 14:22:53 GMT -4
Post by Alana Merez on Mar 24, 2010 14:22:53 GMT -4
Thanks Gabe! ' Eyes Of Love ' You came to me, like a shooting star. So rare and full of hope. All my dreams rested in your hands, the moment our eyes met. Like a diamond in the suns glare. So magnificant, and bold among the rest. Heaven never seemed so near. Luke warm pools of chocolate, a smile made of sun. You're my only one.
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Mar 24, 2010 15:29:56 GMT -4
Post by Ashley Ellis Gray on Mar 24, 2010 15:29:56 GMT -4
Wow!! thats amazing!
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Mar 24, 2010 19:05:19 GMT -4
Post by Alana Merez on Mar 24, 2010 19:05:19 GMT -4
Here's one I wrote, based on The Halfblooded Prince. I'm sure everyone can guess who it's about.
You hide behind your mask of deception. Each step you take, practiced to perfection. Never slip or stumble, don't bother being humble. Were the words, your father used to mumble. But what happens when the mask starts to crack? When it becomes clear, all that you lack? Will you weep, those bittersweet tears? Will that perfect face, crumble with fear?
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May 2, 2010 11:15:04 GMT -4
Post by Alana Merez on May 2, 2010 11:15:04 GMT -4
' Something special '
It's strange the type of people life brings. Some you're better off without, And others... you can't live without Guess what category you're under. I could never dream of a better companion. My rock... my only stability, in a raging ocean of emotions. This world is tough. Turning me into another me. Enforcing those walls I've learned to build, to keep myself safe. But you? Strip away those walls with no hesitation. Look at me through special lens, that see right through me. Your arms were made to comfort, sending so much warmth. I would never find a better companion, even if I searched the world. You're something special, never forget.
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May 16, 2010 16:08:16 GMT -4
Post by Alana Merez on May 16, 2010 16:08:16 GMT -4
' When I close my eyes '
Vivid colors swirling around me, like a sea of rainbows. It's funny how the world seems much brighter behind closed lids. Perhaps that's why so many of us, walk around with eyes closed. Never really seeing things for what they really are, but what we want them to be. This life is never certain, every sense of direction altering with each day. Faces of those we knew changing into something new. Is there a cure to life? Maybe there's a map hidden within heaven, but how unfortunate for us who remain blind. Never knowing what lays ahead, only behind. How must the past remain the past then, when it is all we know?
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May 18, 2010 20:07:44 GMT -4
Post by Alana Merez on May 18, 2010 20:07:44 GMT -4
This isn't really a poem. Just my thoughts.
Life is like a notebook... the pages start out blank, then fill with memories. And like a notebook, there's some pates I want to keep fresh. Carefully placed ink, not traced by fingerprints. But the ink always fades, with times curse. Then... some pages I want to rip out completely, or have the chance to undo. But we leave our marks as we move along. Unable to go back and clean up messy ink splatters. I guess at this point, I should state why I'm writing this. If there was a root, or anything near stable enough. What can I say, I'm just a girl stuck in an awkward phase. Not exactly dieing, but sure as hell not living. I guess I'm just writing out of hope that I'll find my center. Some type of relief from a life of fear and uncertainty. Underneath the layers of dirt and grime, there's gotta be more right? Something real, and just me; Instead of who I'm supposed to be, who everyone else wants me to be.
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Jun 17, 2010 17:04:02 GMT -4
Post by Alana Merez on Jun 17, 2010 17:04:02 GMT -4
" Everything to me "
Who knew the very essence of light, could be created into such a solid form? Life truly captured in the depths of your eyes. Music wherever your laughter breaks through. There was nothing, except the color Grey once upon a time, in my world. Then you came along, paint brush in hand... painting my world in all the colors of the rainbow. Such a sudden light, with no warning of hint of coming. Divine in all ways, pure in every word. An angel in a world of darkness, breaking through the cold to warm me. I used to think, to see heaven my gaze would have to travel to the skies. But heaven is right beside me, more sure than ever. And what a sin to not have recognized before!
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Jun 17, 2010 18:03:16 GMT -4
Post by Administrator on Jun 17, 2010 18:03:16 GMT -4
is the halfblood prince about Malfoy?
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Jun 17, 2010 18:05:55 GMT -4
Post by Alana Merez on Jun 17, 2010 18:05:55 GMT -4
Yeah lol
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Jun 17, 2010 18:07:39 GMT -4
Post by Isabelle Viles on Jun 17, 2010 18:07:39 GMT -4
^ totally what I was about to ask. Maybe is was the perfect face thing? *fangirl sigh* I'm totally a Draco-holic.
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Jun 17, 2010 18:08:45 GMT -4
Post by Alana Merez on Jun 17, 2010 18:08:45 GMT -4
*Squeal* Me too!! *Tackles Izz* We were totally meant to be bf's lol
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